[ When Riley receives this message, she's out in the goddamn woods. She's been out in the goddamn woods for nearly a week, having to cohabitate with people she loves (and a giant badger!) in one of the most uncomfortable experiences of her life.
She is, as they say, At Her Fucking Limit. ]
What in the world do you think you're doing? Here? Really? Are you really this immature? Even in another world, something as stupid and pointless as chain letters still exist?
There are so many other things you could be doing with your time. Practicing a hobby, engaging in bettering yourself. Maybe getting a job! Even hunting! That would be a better use of an afternoon than using it to send unfunny messages to random people on the internet. You can't just tack a 420 on the end of your username and expect it to be a good joke, for the record.
And another thing! "He was so heartbroken he died" THAT is your big climactic moment? He didn't get the candy he wanted, so he died??? Wow!! Terrifying! That could only scare a five-year-old, and even then that's a stretch!! You should be ashamed of yourself. This is the least scary story I have ever read. And it has NOTHING to do with the "curse" you're trying to insist exists. It's not scary AND it's poorly constructed to a ridiculous degree.
<CheeryCherry>
She is, as they say, At Her Fucking Limit. ]
What in the world do you think you're doing? Here? Really? Are you really this immature? Even in another world, something as stupid and pointless as chain letters still exist?
There are so many other things you could be doing with your time. Practicing a hobby, engaging in bettering yourself. Maybe getting a job! Even hunting! That would be a better use of an afternoon than using it to send unfunny messages to random people on the internet. You can't just tack a 420 on the end of your username and expect it to be a good joke, for the record.
And another thing! "He was so heartbroken he died" THAT is your big climactic moment? He didn't get the candy he wanted, so he died??? Wow!! Terrifying! That could only scare a five-year-old, and even then that's a stretch!! You should be ashamed of yourself. This is the least scary story I have ever read. And it has NOTHING to do with the "curse" you're trying to insist exists. It's not scary AND it's poorly constructed to a ridiculous degree.